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Post by shinra91 on Apr 4, 2009 16:39:04 GMT -5
Player: Shinra91: deviantart.com/shinra91 Name: Vincent Valentine Rank: ex turk Title: Gender: Male Hair: black. long Eyes: crimson Height: 6'0" Age: 27 (physically) 55 (chronologically, Final Fantasy VII) 57 (Advent Children) 58 (Dirge of Cerberus Appearance: tattered red cape, held in place over his shoulders and lower face by several buckles, underneath the cape, is black leather with several straps and buckles, wears a holster for his gun against his right leg, pointed metallic boots. golden gauntlet on his left arm, red band on his forehead, Sexuality: straight Personality: mysterious, calm Element/Special Ability: chaos, Weapon: cerberus
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Post by Saix on Apr 5, 2009 18:07:46 GMT -5
Rejected.
Reasons:
1. Choose an age. He can't be all of them.
2. Use proper grammar; capitalization, periods, full words and sentences etc. These go up on the site as is, so if you can't do this, please don't bother reapplying. We don't care if you script in RP, but we shouldn't be expected to edit your profiles so their ledgible for everyone.
3. More description please; two words doesn't cut it for personality for instance. If you want examples; go look at the profiles sections of our site. I also suggest you read Xemnas' Commandments.:highlighted:
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