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Post by Kairi on Jun 10, 2009 17:00:31 GMT -5
Player: Kairi555 kairi555.deviantart.com/Name: Kairi Rank: (if applicable, number in the Organization, etc) Title: Queen of Light and Flowers Gender: Female Hair: Red and Brown Mix Eyes: Light Blue Height: 5’3 Age: 15 Appearance: Pink dress, white undershirt, purple shoes, hair down, no make-up Sexuality: ? Personality: Kind, smart, funny and full of joy and energy. Element/Special Ability: Light Weapon: Keyblade
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Post by Saix on Jun 10, 2009 17:32:20 GMT -5
1.I'd like to see some capitalization, punctuation, and more text in personality and appearance.
2. All fields also have to be entered. No blanks or ?. If she's undecided, say so. Otherwise, absolutely no empty fields.
3. Further, please choose another element. Light belongs to Roxas.
These things go on the site too, so keep that in mind. :highlighted:
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Post by Marluxia on Jun 23, 2009 4:00:19 GMT -5
No reply in over a week, consider this rejected?
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